Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
WALT: make good sentences. The task was that we had to do a recount about our holiday. The thing i enjoyed the most was finding the backgrounds. What i found challenging was the writing. I could improve to do my work faster.
Kia ora Hunter, ko Ms Peters toku ingoa. Nō te kura o Ahipara ahau. I enjoyed reading your Captivating recount. I like the descriptive way you wrote and the images for your backgrounds you used to show what you meant. To be better than before (BTB) maybe you could add more detail by writing a paragraph for each sense and to check your spelling. Keep up the good effort! Mā te wa.
Kia ora Hunter, ko Ms Peters toku ingoa. Nō te kura o Ahipara ahau.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your Captivating recount. I like the descriptive way you wrote and the images for your backgrounds you used to show what you meant. To be better than before (BTB) maybe you could add more detail by writing a paragraph for each sense and to check your spelling. Keep up the good effort! Mā te wa.