Kia ora! I am a Year 7 student in Room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia ora Hunter, I like how you described your trip to Mt Ruapehu and the way you used some of the five senses in your recount. Maybe next time you could work on proofreading your writing and checking it makes sense. Blog ya later! Ms Peters.
Kia ora Hunter,
ReplyDeleteI like how you described your trip to Mt Ruapehu and the way you used some of the five senses in your recount. Maybe next time you could work on proofreading your writing and checking it makes sense. Blog ya later! Ms Peters.